Black Poetry : If I could Render You Speechless

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  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    another date to remember

    that fateful December

    when my heart fell into a blender

    that day i watched the one person of your gender

    who could

    inspire me to write this many rhymes so sweet and tender

    walk away before i could send her

    my love



    howard
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your notes can make a heart rise and fall. Bittersweet, Howard.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    just beautiful
     
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    Wow!

    This flow is so tyte. Good write.

    Desert Storm
     
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    thanks guys
     
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