Quiet Poetry Lounge : IF I COULD I WOULD (#what if)

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    If i could change life
    everything would live
    for the world to enrich on and from

    And If i was da river
    all my streams would run freedom
    where mentals can think for themselves

    If i was da sun
    I would rise for humankind rights
    shine on the blind so they have light

    If i was a note
    in harmony i would sing melodies
    a song worrie free to all labor

    If i was air mass of wind
    I would blow poverty into the unknown
    and let my air kiss destruction goodbye

    And if, just if / I was Raindrops
    I would wash evil away and clean discrimination
    from the hearts of thy land which we stand

    If i was a creator to words
    surely i would revert da table how we speaketh
    and use words that has torn us apart

    Just think if i was starz above
    I would fall and end battles of warfare
    destroy nuclear & chemical weapons

    If I was Love
    I would change hearts and how you see me
    why you use my L-O-V-E in coruption

    If i was an circle
    I would venture around n' around
    so that de world can see I am
    what i am and thy complete circle to life

    If i could i would but i'm not
    just another soul fighting in the mist
    trying to change or make a different

    So i'll just revisit my image and pray
    pray and pray wit hope for world
    peace/ understanding/ life/ fair justice
    :cool:
     
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    TotalView Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah, what if? Your love for humanity shines through in this piece. Nicely done.
     
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    Very well Scripted! Ur Amazing:)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank you ladies for the visit