Black Poetry : if i could eat this poem...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by wildflower7, Oct 4, 2002.

  1. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    if i could eat this poem
    i'd be ingesting a hot, sticky, sweet something
    licking my fingers
    it would drip down the sides of my mouth
    and chin...

    if i could eat this poem
    i'd savor the warm smells that i inhale
    the closer it comes to my mouth
    and i'd ask you if you would like to
    taste my hot sweet poem
    mmmmmmm...

    if i could eat this poem
    i'd introduce it in foreplay
    and i'd eat it off your body
    with some whipped cream
    i'd make you breathe hard
    and grab my hair
    and pull me up so you can hold me and
    enter me slow
    and make me explode as you
    push inside...

    let's eat this poem tonight!
     
  2. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOOOOOOOWEEEEEEE!!!!!! GIRL THIS IS HOT!!!!!.....got me getting hungry over here....Hey Anybody out there want to eat some poetry tonight?
     
  3. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dizzammmmm!!! Flower!

    Save me a slice of dat slim...lol Think I just might lunch on this one hea for a few...

    Reas
     
  4. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :lol: Bishop, I knew you'd enjoy this one! Eat well ;)

    lunch on, Reason! that's what it's for!:x:
    -7:spinstar:
     
  5. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nawl

    See Flower you tryin to get somthin started... or was that Bishop with the Xtreme takeover that did this???

    If I could eat this poem i'd...
     
  6. LiLi

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    SAY WHAT??!! LOL...this right here is a trip!!! i wasn't feeling at all hungry before...but now um...i could taste a little somethin myself! LOL

    this is classic!
     
  7. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Reason don't blame me...I didn't do nuthin'
     
  8. DaFlavaFul

    DaFlavaFul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    UmM? Yall? i feel like eating something fierce, is it just me or there something intoxicating about this flow?
     
  9. Kitana

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    all I'm gonna say is...

    the imagery was great....and had nothin to do with food....

    K
     
  10. alyce

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    gurllll....!!!!!

    as eventide approaches, I read this joint and you know all I could envision???????

    LIPS! HUH?



    alyce
     
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