Black Poetry : If I could dream....

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  1. tbone5769

    tbone5769 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If I could dream……
    My dream would be
    Endless nights of you and me…
    Or is it me and you,
    Whatever the phrase, you choose,
    Or words you use,
    I want you to be in that dream
    If I could dream?
    I would dream that a bad day with us,
    Would only mean that it rained that day,
    But we would change that rain into something positive
    Building a sandcastle in the muddy clay
    On white beaches, on tropic isles……
    In my dream, anything that ailed me
    Would be cured by your smile.
    If I could dream?
    I would dream that …… I could touch you in ways
    You have never been touched…..
    Stroking your body and your soul….
    Completing you whole, not half…..
    Rose petals lay on the top of the water in your bath……
    Covering you just enough to make me wonder,
    How it would be if I went under…
    If I could dream
    I would dream that romantic nights would never end…
    I would dream that I was the gentle breeze…that caressed your skin….
    If I could dream
    I would dream that I would be first in your life…..we’d be Husband and wife
    ……Happily ever after , until both were caught up in the
    Rapture…..
    A glimpse of life I capture, when I see the fullness of your lips,
    The thickness of your hips….
    And they glide effortlessly, in motion, your curves caress my mind
    Like warm lotion, that sticks to your skin,
    I close my eyes tight, so I won’t wake from this dream I’m stuck in….
    But if I do, and my dreams of you, are interrupted….
    I’ll just relish in the thought of another dream,
    That I personally have sculpted….
    Or until I reach my destination, and open my door,
    And experience the supernatural, in the natural
    Waking up from the sun that rises in the east
    Causing my dreams to cease ….
    I rollover and smile, cause my dream is reality…..laying
    Next to me…
     
  2. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lovely poem
    beautiful flow
     
  3. tbone5769

    tbone5769 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dreamin

    thanks...it's good to be back, storms cause you to drift
    from your thoughts.....im just glad to have a place to express
    myself.....


    Peace!
     
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    TBone this is sweet ... got me dream'n ...

    Welcome Home

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tbone...dream on...this is nice poet.

    blak
     
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    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    these words that you have laid are a dream in and of itself ......... Very nicley done
    Natasha :heart:
     
  7. tbone5769

    tbone5769 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks

    thanks for your responses......to dream is to have hope,.....I hope my dream lasts forever.....
     
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