Black Poetry : If I can't Say a Word

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  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If I can't say a word
    I'll make it,mayne
    I'll get myself so caught up

    Wanting you from tha way I was brought up
    To loose ya in the end
    My faith has been stilled
    Still loosed to keep ya close

    Try to explain it if I can
    It's just emotions taking me over
    I need a second chance

    To live this life
    And live it out well

    Don't know where I'll end up
    But want to break loose and fancy free
    I feel tha rhythm and expressions
    Expressions of history

    Here beside you
    The ruins are
    I look at what I've accomplished
    and I know that I'm a star

    Raw like life is
    My heart cries
    My soul lays
    Within tha ebyss
    in spiritual realms

    Through melodys distances
    I see traces of you
    Frustrated
    Elaborated
    and fully demonstrated

    to you

    Sometimes these days
    Can't say a word
    Flow on if
    I can't say a word.

    Desert Storm
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HI Sis
    Oh Yes. Sometime you have
    so much to say that it's hard
    to just let it flow.
    We all do need that second chance to make it right
    to get it right, because for sure
    if we didn't take the chance to try it.
    We would never have known what works or not.
    Life is a school. That has levels
    that goes on forever.
    Nice flow sis..much love

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wondering what it would be like if we all had that second chance...just contemplating that. Sometimes thoughts run through our mind faster than we can write them all down, but I think you did, very well.
     
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    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    But you know what? We may not be able to erase or rewrite the past but everyday we wake up to another glorious morning we get a second chance...a second chance to do things better with more wisdom than the days before! For with each new day we are a little bit smarter and that is something to be excited about!

    Great flow my sister!
     
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    nice piece love it.hopelisromantic u a 100% rite i feel da same way.

    great stuff.
     
  6. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    watzinaname-yea,i agree,-can't let nothing hold me back, no!, i got to keep on moooooving! hee,hee,hee-
    hopelisromantic- i do agreeth with you entirely.
    rapchild-thank you too. do whatcha gotta do, mayne.

    yep,yep,yep!

    Thank you all, thanks for pushing me through da trenches!

    Much Love,
    Desert Storm
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    to live is to learn

    this had some much spirit sis

     
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    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    dang sis

    how bout if u can't find the words I will...

    and if I can't can u for me....

    we can do this all of us together.... and we'll find forever...

    love ya sis......

    and u always say just the right words.....

    One!
     
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