Black Poetry : If HE Doesn’t…

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  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I shall pen a love verse or two for you
    during those times you feel…

    unmoved by
    H~I~M

    When HE turns your once love-ly dreams
    into nightmares that awaken you in trembling
    fear and drenching sweat…

    I will comfort you with the warmth of my
    love vibrancy to securely rock you back
    into sleep of calm; drifting off

    thinking
    &
    feeling

    thoughts of me; your new poetical lover

    If HE doesn’t feel you like he once
    used to…

    Come unto me as you read my lover’s
    scribe that grips your mental need…

    pleasurably

    If HE doesn’t touch you seductively anymore,
    perhaps because he’s forgotten where
    your erogenous secrets lay…

    Allow me to touch you there with a
    simple passage of love that seduces
    your essence and fascinates your soul

    Surely my love poet’s passion will find
    and indulge your erotic sensualities

    and

    If, for an instance, HE doesn’t make love
    to you with all his heart and mind…

    Favor me with the gratification of enrapturing
    our minds, bodies, and spirits into their intended
    purposes…

    to love

    hard, strong, & true

    and lastly…

    If HE simply doesn’t love you anymore…

    know that I always have

    &

    I always will

    love you until

    the
    end
    of
    time…

    ©GQINC2K2
     
  2. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Q My Brutha!!!

    If HE read this im sure he will do his best to stay on his toes...lol But I dont think that will stop the ladies from checkin fa you cuz!! lol This was all dat dog!

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GeeQue.


    ...i'ont know 'bout you

    but...
    i'm
    tingling.
    (RT)

    :heart:
    BlakGurl~
     
  4. ShadeeLadee

    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa!

    this is beautiful, GQ....

    sometimes, though, it's not that simple. sometimes, though, all we want to read are those special words from "the one" who set us poetically "free"....

    but this IS beautiful, though! :)


    SWT
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    GQ

    man he knows now dat true love awaits her
    if he slip O' boy coz u scribe a vibe of essence
    to embrace every nyght for every lady of love
    tyght 2 def man!:heart: :toast:
     
  6. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    GQ

    laying it down
    like always in the
    comfort zone

    showing support
    to the lovelies


    peace
    DSS
     
  7. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Young, blak Michael Jackson said it best....

    Cause if he doesn't,

    I'll Be There!!!!! :laugh:

    Thanks for the hit ya'll!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    GQ i knew u would be

    right there making thangz all good in her life
    so the bruthas better walk da line right
    any slip and bam! GQ comes through!

    man do it like u know it and steal away!:D
    but wait til night so i can see ya foot steps:lol:
     
  9. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Okay...

    don't make me start throwin thangz at you too, cuz. This was too tight!!! I'm lovin it...:)
     
  10. Heartbeat

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    You saying it!!! Beautiful piece.

    BE