Black Poetry : If Ever...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by arthur1210, Sep 3, 2008.

  1. arthur1210

    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Nov 6, 2003
    Messages:
    223
    Likes Received:
    5
    Occupation:
    Student/Sales
    Location:
    FLA
    Ratings:
    +5
    I know a little about her
    But, I don't think I know enough
    Wanting to get to what's behind
    The smile I adore so much
    Somehow, wanting to get closer
    Beyond close enough to touch
    Being beyond her sexiness
    And any simple feelings of lust

    My situation is solid & stable
    Lord knows, I've paid my dues
    Still, I 'm working on my future
    Tightening any loose screws
    Her smile is extremely delightful
    I feel it's a tool I could use
    Thus, I’ll make efforts to keep in-touch
    On any level she may choose

    Chasing private moments of refuge
    Whenever she's running through my mind
    Prudently pondering the potential
    That one day I may call her mine
    Assessing what it’ll take to achieve this
    The hills I may l have to clime
    Imagining being so close to her
    Whenever she’ll make the time

    Perhaps, I'll learn of her future
    Yes, the one she sees in her dreams
    Learn the sources of her laughter
    And all the songs that make her sing
    Convincing to her to understand
    My hopes to share more than a fling
    There are queen like attributes I see
    If ever, I were to be her king
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Oct 4, 2003
    Messages:
    16,340
    Likes Received:
    114
    Location:
    Northeast
    Ratings:
    +122
    I recently had a conversation about how brothers are when they feel like they've found that "one", and your words reflect what was said. This was so endearing...so beautiful. I hope you get that chance to become her king.
     
  3. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 13, 2006
    Messages:
    1,261
    Likes Received:
    206
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    Teacher
    Location:
    Somewhere between paradise and diaster
    Ratings:
    +229
    oh this was so sweet and on point. hope she as ready 4 u as you are for her. :love:
     
  4. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jan 24, 2004
    Messages:
    7,007
    Likes Received:
    160
    Occupation:
    day care provider (own business)
    Location:
    Brick City
    Ratings:
    +161
    Perhaps she's at the other end, just waiting for you, her ..."Knight and shinning Armor"
    Wonderful piece poet!!
     
  5. LovesDestiny

    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Dec 10, 2007
    Messages:
    996
    Likes Received:
    18
    Occupation:
    Finance & Endless Possibilities
    Location:
    Midwest
    Ratings:
    +18
    I always enjoy hearing (or reading in this case) the heart of a man in love with a woman....a King seeking out his Queen! I'm sure if she read these words you wouldn't have any problems capturing her heart....

    Very nice piece here poet!
     
  6. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jun 2, 2006
    Messages:
    1,915
    Likes Received:
    53
    Gender:
    Female
    Ratings:
    +55
    Hello arthur:
    It's been a while but I see your pen
    is still flowing as lovely as ever.
    Talk about oh so sweet.....



    Much Luv
     
  7. arthur1210

    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Nov 6, 2003
    Messages:
    223
    Likes Received:
    5
    Occupation:
    Student/Sales
    Location:
    FLA
    Ratings:
    +5
    Thanks for the love, just something I came across that I wrote a while ago aboutsomeone who became very special to me... needless to say this poem helped my cause
     
  8. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    deeply felt scribe on a personal and up close note to that someone
     
  9. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    Singapore
    Joined:
    May 13, 2003
    Messages:
    6,477
    Likes Received:
    110
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    Servant of the People
    Location:
    Bay Area, CA
    Ratings:
    +131
    Shoooooo... If it was me it would help your cause lol
    Very very romantic :look: :)
     
Loading...