Black Poetry : If Dis World Was Mines

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I'll give u upon ya wish
    i'll give u da love
    and my sweetest kiss
    i'll sho u a bliss
    u'll miss from dis

    I'll stop da rain
    of all da world's pain
    stop da hunger
    wipe away all stress
    whip u in dat pretty
    sweet red dress

    I'll spread da word of GOD
    give life to da meaning of comfort
    caress da tears
    kill all fears
    kiss away hurt so one may smile

    if da world was mines
    there be no more dying
    no lying nor confession
    no work inforced
    no need for what's call money
    just a place in my heart
    for u my sweet honey

    if it was mines i tell u
    our children will not
    have to feel da pain of failure
    da splat of drugs be not
    forth my hand would smash
    da thoughts

    if it was all mines
    life would be slavery free
    minds could think openly
    wit a blessing of he
    as knowledge & wisdom
    can blossome da soul

    if dis world was mines
    baby dis all i give u
    to see da beautiful smile
    upon ya face
    and touch u wit da warmest
    embrace with
    what only a Queen
    so ........so wooooweeeee!
    so much turely miss
    in self man
    i'll be all u dreameth off
    nightly upon ya sleep
    i'll be thee king
    i'll be .............ONLY IF dis world was mines....:eek:
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich...Rich...Rich,

    This poem is very much a passionate piece.

    Lovin' Yo Luv!

    Joyce
     
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    sistah Queen of Haiku's if dis was my world da love
    would flow from every human whom be of birth so
    da pain
    da hurt
    our stress
    would be not
    and my beloveth would worry free .......thank u sistah
     
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    coz da world need some working on to change da living
    if dis was all mines i'll maketh forth that one know thou saviour
    i see that every heart be fill wit love & devotion every soul
    may be free of pain all minds be filled wit wisdom & knowledge
    so nothing but smiles and beautiful words be spoken
    crime would be not nor guns nor killings
    only love peace and unity as all peoples united as one whole
    my world is a just world just follow me------------>dis way>
     
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    $RICH$

    I know you would..
    your heart is big enough for all of us..
    nicely done..


    Epiphany :heart:
     
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    Epip......thank u ever so much u always step in on tyme
    see dat's why ole Rich luv ya .........
     
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    no doubt $$RICH$$ da world is yours :D
     
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    man j'hiah i could change so many things going on
    and make dis a much better place only if...............thankz brutha
     
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    why we can't change a thang !!???
    if dis world was mines
    i would do thangz so da children
    would be happier & joyful & much wiser
    just if!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    rich

    i lovedided it
    man
    this was that sh*t son
    loving the flow man
    the ideas
    the hope

    dssNY
     
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