Black Poetry : If Black Suede could talk...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Jan 22, 2002.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    get inside my mind understand me
    ...don't spare me...I might be able
    to save a future...If you use me to
    an extreme extent the young lad may
    need sutures...but he will heal and
    thank you 10 years from now...

    I done hit mo' *** than wilt chamberlain
    be claimin'...soon to be inducted into the
    "It's gone hurt me mo' than you" hall of
    fame and...it's a shame that some of ya'll
    have forgotten my importance

    tried to put me out of business...by using
    switches...then "dumbing down" and using
    time outs...like isolation disciplines a child...
    it just gives him more time to scheme...ya'll
    just don't know...

    I belong to that cybergroup "beatdatass.com"
    ...we exchange vibes and tales of our "beating
    tail lives"...and those we could not save...no
    matter how many times we were sent to work
    ...it hurts to see past users give up on me...just
    lose control of the youth....to tell you the truth,
    they miss me too...

    ...cause hard heads make a soft *** or just
    make 'em listen a bit...but to many have grown deaf
    now and now their bodies beat beats on the
    pavement...and I hate that song...if only they
    understood...that exercising me would save lives
    and keep jails less populated and keep achievement up
    and respect for parents up and keep...

    ...graves empty

    ...but the disorder of laws have got some parents scared
    to pick me up and call to the heavens before...letting me
    talk to they kids up close and real personal...

    now time outs are failing out of school cause kids
    are becoming isolated and scheming instead of dreaming...

    blakverb "off da top trippin"
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BlakMan!!!!

    Don't eva stop trippin'!!!!

    This is exceptional "off da top" real!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak

    I'm in agreement here with GQ :) Your "off da top" be off da charts....

    Write the words poet!

    N2
     
  4. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    start the revolution man

    yo i don't ride ***** ****s but you about as close as i'm gonna get

    dropped a major bomb here

    hard head makes soft ***
    and scheming instead of
    dreaming

    i lovedided it

    you too deep for me

    dssNY
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    fam thanks. don't spare the rod, save a life.

    blak
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BRAVO!!... BLaK Man!! :)

    ...i gots to agree wit ya on this one!!
    too many bad *** kids runnin' 'round here!
    wit too many parents who not just afraid of
    the "system"... they are actually AFRAID of
    their OWN children!! what's that about?? :confused:
    N E Way!! Thanks for the message!

    :heart:
    QueenGa~
     
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