Black Poetry : if, ands, & buts

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by j'hiah, Apr 27, 2002.

  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    [COLOR=royal blue]if i could turn back the hands of time
    and prove to you my committment i would
    but you say it's too late

    if i could only have the chance to take away the pain
    and heal the hurt...if only i could
    but you say it's too great

    if i could have you for one long night expressing all within
    and declare shamelessly my sins to you.. tonight, i should
    but what? you have a date?

    if by chance i could make you see what you are to me
    and show you the life we could've shared.. i would
    but no longer am i willing to wait


    fellas, life goes on. no if ands and buts about it so get over her live learn and move on!! get and remain in God's will

    nfinitely
    jh.
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  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    JP.


    (you g'on catch a beat down!! :tongue: )

    if i tell you that this joynt is too fly
    and that i love-did it to def you would smile
    but! since i'm mad wit yo *** i ain't sayin' ****! :lol:

    NfiniteLove, chile...
    elayne.
     
  3. brotherman

    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Give it up...a round of applause

    You make me feel good to have dropped by today....tight but of course you knew that beforehand...peace.
     
  4. poeticdelight

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    certainly...

    a tight flow
    as always

    most definitely

    one

    pd
     
  5. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yo feeling on this here

    100000000000000000000%

    poet

    peace

    dssNY
     
  6. eternal

    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Great Piece

    Well I shonuff love-did it!!!
    lol
    Very nicely written, and I overstand!
    Eternal:wave:
     
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    Great piece J'hiah. But remember, no regrets right? MOve on and find someone worth your time.
    *Emma*
     
  8. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    J'hiah,

    If life doesn't go on you die where you stand. Great piece!

    BE
     
  9. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "life goes on" no doubt
    thanks for sharing
     
  10. YeshuJah

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    That little word if-

    I is the ninth letter of the English alphabeth. 3 3 3; F is the sixth.
    3 3, 1(3) less than I, while F is 1(3) more.
    1 & 2- 3 again. In any case 6 & 9 are the same form. One upside down, the other right side up. Sheer confusion. IF.
     
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