Black Poetry : Idle Storm

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sarcasm4eva, May 22, 2003.

  1. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yea, i have a quietstorm goin on inside,
    As in 365....meanin all the time.
    I wanna be free,
    Get away from all this **** that depresses me.
    Yes i said "depressed",
    Dont act like u never felt like this.
    Like ur in a box,
    Or stepped in some glue,
    Now u cant move.
    Its just a f*&%ed up groove.
    Dark clouds start to settle in,
    Ur thoughts spinnin out of control.....
    U wanna protect urself from a mental tornado.
    Wonderin whats ur purpose?
    Is it even worth all this?
    Why put up a fight,
    Knowin this **** aint even right.
    I feel so worthless n helpless.
    I thought i had control of this thing we call life.
    U feel like u dont matter,
    No one knows ur true battle.
    U wanna lash out.
    Not really admittin that u need help.....
    U know u can do this by urself.
    U just need.....
    Someone 2 wipe ur tears away.
    Take ur fears away.
    Let them tell u everythin will b okay.
    Receive a hug that gives u amnesia.
    Wasnt a storm just comin my way??
    Dont u know, there's always someone who can keep it at bay....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nice flow i feel ya
    we all feel dis way at times in life
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I wish you freedom!
    Peace to ya!
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I kno absolutely how you feel it's the worse feeling in the world I am glad you took the time to flow about it sista you express it so cleary luv u gurl don't let it get to you peace and blessins keep flowin always :)

    p.s. beautiful flow as always :)
     
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    STORMY

    Stormy,
    Sends calm weather
    Making us feel better!

    1poetsought ~ :heart:
     
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    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwwwww thanx every1........i really appreciate it.....im feelin much better now......hope to b hittin y'all w/ somethin new soon.
    ::group hug:: much love :)
     
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