Black Poetry : Ice, My Drug of Choice

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ice, my drug of choice
    Just hit me up one time
    Inject it deep into my skin, so the ice
    can flow thru my veins, sublime
    in the notion of a sub-zero effect.
    Why?
    Because I feel nothing.
    Just let me flat line in my mind.
    Don't want to feel anything too intense.
    Numbness, will be only too kind.
    My heart gets so heavy
    I tend to fall too deep
    Don't want it to take me under.
    The pain even follows me into my sleep.
    So, just let this ice course through
    Let it run within each and every artery.
    I want the kind of ease, that comes
    from being emotionally free.
    Can I get another hit please?
    Ahhhhh...
    Thank you.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hummm!
    u wait da ice man
    to give u dat chill
    this was tyte and love the creativity
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very, very cleverly put, it had such a chill to it...yet enough warmth to melt the chill...wow I like the way you Iced and diced that one. Very nice indeed. And thanks for not only being wonderful, but for the creativity of it from begining to end.
     
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    You really took us there, girl. It may be ice, but this is hot.
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Rich. I have my own supply of ice now, for quick relief ya know? Hope you're enjoying that birthday of yours.
    Queentswana, thank you, I tried to come up with something a bit different.
    Thank you gempis, for taking the trip to the ice world.
     
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    Sister...sometimes you just want to be numb...
    I feel you...
    just turn those emotions off and operate on auto pilot...
    if there were only such a thing...
    and if ice were really that effective...j/k

    masterfully scribed...as always
     
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    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I LIKES THIS! you used ice as your form of drug, pure genius in this, i wish i could say more, but i'd just keep repeating myself.............man i likes---no i LOVE this one, keep scribin.......i feel the vibe....... :yo:
     
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    it's plain to see
    you can't change me
    cause ima be dat ***** with ice...lol
    tyte piece watz
    one love
    khasm
     
  9. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh but if we could, sage, thank you for such kind words poet.
    You're making me feel very humbled lilcherry76, thank you.
    Tossin in a flow with your response I see, Khasm, thank you for the props on this.
     
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