Black Poetry : Ice (2003)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thespokesman, Aug 6, 2003.

  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    we all love ice,

    Ice

    The glimmer on you, labeled you bling
    Such a precious thing, lifetime ring
    Talk to conscience with no opacity
    Elegance of geometric form, such rhapsody
    That spark in dark, reflected marks, what a glare
    Light the stair to hearts, dreams to nightmares
    Nymphatic, worn on, adorned on
    In eyes of fluorescence, turned on
    Royalty the king’s princess
    Hang, embrace the charmed breast
    Clean dipped in rainbow zest
    Stones, materials, natural element
    Cut, chip, incisions like sediment
    Glass sliced up, body chiseled
    Freeze rain so it frizzle
    Impersonate, admire beauty in tres d
    Farmer market, grow in carrots
    Faces of a clown, live by merit
    Grandmas box, inside to inherit
    Risk in coppin, dare it
    Best friend, feminine flesh
    Invisible like mesh, reached a crest
    Hold on, hold hands, cuffin
    Proposed, baked in muffin
    Bells, altar, basket floral
    Elegant, suave coral
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Chillin' with Thespokesman, is so cool!
     
  3. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A womans best friend!

    Nice flow!
     
  4. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Woooo, this piece is so tight and so dense. Love your tapestry.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well pose'd
    u have great talent
     
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    this is a nice flow
    the glimmering
    wonderful
    Peace