Black Poetry : I....

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  1. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I gain strength through
    The weakness I have presented
    Through, how I have endeavored
    My truth
    I wait like patience
    in a balance like mood
    Come love with me
    Come into the womb
    I am Strong because
    I survive with light
    Dark falls I ask
    If its intentions are right
    Come sit with me
    I am awaiting your Move
    I am strong
    Because of you...


    :star::star::star::star::star::star::star::star::star::star::star::star::star::
    :angel1::angel1::angel1::angel1::angel1::angel1::angel1::
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I
    am the power of thy day
    from da heart u display
    come sit wit me
    upon da glow
    awaiting yo move let it go
    i am strong
    da power of right
    wrong pose no light
    for truth is u
    i see a new
    come sit wit me
    because of u.........
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Containing the Enchantment
    of the Future
    With It I can be strong
    Like the base, the structure
    of the door way and window
    I uphold
    I behold new Length
    So come Pirch with me
    With this...
    New mystery...
    this girth
    Because of you
    I am this way


    :chef:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You have such a strong foundation, that all that is built upon it, just adds to the strength of "I". Flow on, Poet of the Week!!! :)
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey PLATINUMILLITY1
    So true, Your poem tells me that in our weakest moment
    That is when we gain our strength and that is good.
    Very nice

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY:
    I really enjoyed this read
    very uplifting and refreshing.


    Much Luv
     
  7. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Soo Much Love Ladies
    :hearts1::hearts1::hearts1::hearts1:
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The collab was great ...^5
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    Plat

    you have been on fire lately

    what's going on boo?

    dang you are brangin it

    lol
     
  10. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Peace Queentswana :love:

    Thankx Street So'ja
    I'm Just making the change
    LOL
    Peace for the Love
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