Black Poetry : I,...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, Jul 25, 2001.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I,
    Being me

    Want to find

    The,

    Secrets to your heart,soul,and mind

    Because

    You,

    Just being you make

    Me,

    Feel the way you do

    Like

    Nobody else can do

    You are so beautiful

    And no one else can do

    The things you do

    Such as

    Sing me a song acapella

    Share your mind,intelligence and knowledge

    You talk some sense into me

    I've had

    Lot's of people telling me

    That I was odd

    And you make me feel

    Like I'm not

    And I

    Want you to be by myside

    And we can talk on the beach of the sand

    And just walk

    Hand in Hand

    A midst the cool gentle breeze

    Under the sunset

    For all the world

    To see

    Because

    I

    Love

    You!

    And I know you love me

    I

    Do

    Believe

    In miracles

    You mean so much to me

    So let me start by saying this

    I

    Have never expierenced

    Such true bliss

    Love you,

    Miss you

    Sincerely,
    Desert Storm
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    DS -

    like a toaster in the bath water i'm shocking
    a suprise in your christmas stocking
    call johnny cochran
    the road to stockton
    lined with music and we rockin'

    you say the sweetest stuff
    the soft touch
    can't get enough
    what you want
    what a nig ah supposed to do front

    say it from the heart
    the verbal darts
    meet their target
    beg your pardon
    the sun's shining in stockton




    DSSNY
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so beautiful

    4 a second u had me thinking i was he
    yet i know not and the beauty u posed
    forth the loveth of heart u can have
    now i know ........and i offer u blessings
    forth whom he be and wish great love
    upon u ..........simply beautiful storm.....:heart: :kiss:
     
  4. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Storm,

    Blow queen blow!!!!

    Tight work!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
  5. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hello everybody!

    Hey wassup y'all just thought that I'd stop by and say hello! Greeting to all. Thanks for the many blessings! Means a lot to me. Shout outs! So'ja I don't know what to say. Guess all I can say is thanks. Gq you awesome man! ha ha ha Rich so gentle sweet spirit always touching my heart. Thanks
    Your essence is like sweet perfume!
    Desert Storm
     
  6. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm sorry, i missed this one desert stormin'...gurl, this piece is beautiful, too. i'm lovin' yo love poetry.

    ~~~chaptersoflove~~~