Black Poetry : I......

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I made a stand last night…
    Can you tell me if you
    Know..
    Can you even hear…
    I made a stand last night…

    I made a stand last night
    Do you believe in me
    Can you understand
    What I did….
    For I made a stand all alone..

    I made a stand last night…
    To love me
    To respect me
    To always be me…
    I made a stand last night….
    You no longer come first…
    For I made a stand last night…



    And I said….goodbye….

    pieces of untitle life
    a blackangel thang.....
    copyright 2003
    :kiss:
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was felt and the message was real...

    there are times when we have to make that stand
    within ourselves, for ourselves............to better ourselves
    and our surroundings.......sometimes that involves a
    goodbye..........in order to excel and grow sometimes we must
    leave certain things behind...


    I really enjoyed this as I could relate on many levels...
    Wonderful work, Mzblkangel!
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this a great poem...one of your best...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well felt
    u made the stand to be who u are
    and what u is to be ....sometime it
    takes a goodbye to see your sweet
    hello

    the heart speaks clear most def heard here
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes makin a stand...
    moved on to begin the new...
    like exhale....
    dig dat....

    thank you guys for reading and relpin...
     
  6. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm glad you made that stand...you can only be you and you should it to the best of your abilities...and loving you, well you can't love anyone else unless you love yourself first. keep it up...this was great
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the read...truelove
     
  8. BaduX

    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I luv this...only soon i will learn to make that stand...God Bless
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my sister you will...
    we all have it in us...
    pray about..then move on...
    God Bless you as well...