Black Poetry : I

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by the_story, Jul 7, 2003.

  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I

    I touch roots
    lie deep in melodies
    that creep in thoughts
    mentally stormin vibes
    openin third eyes,
    I.....spoken word.....
    I.....loves favorite verb.....
    I......
    crashing,pieceing,collisions,courseing,
    through dimensions, making sacred ingravings
    stamped on this mind funky sun dance called




    I
     
  2. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yo this is my first time here, kinda nervous hope u enjoy
     
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    This was quite smooth....Welcome to Destee, can't wait to read more of your work. Nice read!
     
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    Clio_the_Muze Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Babygirl, like the last poem that I read, this one is hot! It's off the hook!! I can't wait until you drop a book or a performance at an Open Mic Night one day. I know you'll blow up the critics!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome from above as i bless u dis love
    welcome to the family of bond as we embrace u
    dis flow is sweet & meek flow on enjoy hope to read more of you to come welcome :) :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
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    And nervous you need not be cuz this was slammin...and I know what you mean.
     
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    I'm feelin it :heart: :wave: Welcome to Destees!!!
     
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    Welcome to Destee's. No need to be nervous. I was at first too, but this is like family. :grouphug:
     
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    Nice flow.. the_story.

    Good summation of " I ". I is the one. The speaker. The writer. The self. The EGO.
     
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    Nahshon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now this is the kinda flow I am looking to see...Rythmical Verbal masterpiece...****...You must be out here showing the novices how the pro's do it...Big Up Poetic Goddess.