Black Poetry : I you can sit at set of sun

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by one_love, Mar 30, 2001.

  1. one_love

    one_love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If you can sit at set of sun
    You will see the beauty be done.
    Feather like clouds disapear
    Yellow, orange, red, purple start to appear
    Sitting on a mexico cliff top
    Makes all of the sound stop
    Breathing in the wind
    and the world begins to spin
    The eyes feel the heat
    almost like a sound beat
    To look at the sun so bright
    fade into the night
    Feeling everything leave my mind
    and so I will find
    The real truth to life
    through out this beautiful sight.
    One_Love
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes indeed One,

    Sunsets are most def a beautiful sight!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
  3. Street So'ja

    Street So'ja Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you

    are a true artist, love your work man you have written stuff that has blown me out the water, glad to see you doing good

    peace ONE
     
  4. one_love

    one_love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ahhh stop it street so'ja

    Your making me blush to much street so'ja! Thanks!~
    One_Love
     
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    Beautiful piece sista. Glad to see you made it over...

    8th!