Black Poetry : I wrote...

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  1. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Last night I had a vision touched
    by reality as
    the darkness there of kissed
    the mind filled with images
    of still pictures of he inside
    she killing me softley
    thinking all along her love
    belonged to me just me
    As I look towards the sky
    I asked why while I witnessed
    the stars falling to the ground
    imprinting the earth leaving a
    void in the soul...so
    I awake trying to escape the
    darkness as my emotions grew
    from bitter into madness
    Perhaps it’s God’s way of
    punishment from past sin or is
    it that she loving to be lustful
    with men...
    My strength once derived from
    the love she gave allowing me
    to be strong facing all that may be
    from my past to my future
    She was the epiphany of pure beauty
    what a delight it was to be in her
    presence...For I once saw heaven
    in her eyes touched by God’s smile
    and now I’m sitting here wondering
    why...so I began to write to ease my
    mind...I write to escape from time
    I write...because **** ain’t fair...
    I write to get rid of this despair...
    I write...to co-exist within every word
    and ryhme to elaborate on what’s on the
    the mind as I hold conversations between
    my soul and pen...I write because I find peace
    when talking into the wind...I write for love
    I write for hope...I write for peace...
    I write because it’s theraputic for me
    I write because my girl said she loved
    me but really doesn’t show it making me
    feel insecure about me about her about us
    it’s like ****...So
    I write because I want to do right in the
    site of God but I’m a sinner...
    I write...because it keeps me company
    I can talk about anything like my secrets
    and sexual tendencies
    I write...to flee from darkness into the
    light...I write to tell the world about a God
    that is merciful giving life as a gift for those
    who live it...I write to understand more about
    me and my relationship with He that sits
    high as I close my eyes I thank God for the
    Good times and the bad even the times when
    I am sad for my trust is no longer in man or
    woman but in God...I write...
    to heal my broken heart...

    God Bless the Soul...
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Shad,

    I feel ya brotha!!!

    Nice scribe!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    rashad.


    sweet lil brother... write on... & on... & on...

    there is a certain type of "healing" that comes
    from the power of the pen & just simp-ly writing
    your thoughts&emotions out... so g'on & let it
    flow. your words are felt... deep-ly.

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
  4. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You Poets!!

    I really appreciate the love GQ & SunShyne...Thank You!!:heart:
     
  5. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece is soul deep
    I'm feelin' the emotional war.
    Hang in there and continue
    to write, it helps calm the storm.
    Thanks for sharing

    Nice to see you in the house.

    Scribeaboutit! It helps.
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  6. BROPOET

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    WOW!!!

    I felt the deepness of this one. The emotional rollercoaster ride of a life time...

    Well done,

    BP
     
  7. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know the feeling!

    "Be not dismayed, whatever betide, God will take care of you"!
    I am silenced by your depth...and have lost my breath!
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
     
  8. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my boyeee!

    mannn this was me all the way.
    i can attest to this poignant scribe :toast:

    nfinite
    jh. (trendz)
     
  9. MsBerry_98

    MsBerry_98 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Boy... I just don't know what to say... you've thrown me yet another time and... I... Mmm...

    You are talented beyond anything I could have ever imagined for you (thank God).

    Much :heart:
     
  10. Heartbeat

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    write on indeed! nice
    BE
     
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