Black Poetry : I Wrote Him Poetry

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticdelight, Feb 17, 2003.

  1. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    i wrote him poetry
    and he ate everything sight

    having a strong appreciation
    for everything that i write

    now i wonder what he's like
    on a cold winter's night all
    alone with no one home
    for a special dinner by candlelight

    now some men just aren't right
    but i still wonder
    how does he sleep at night?

    are his arms folded over plush pillows
    after he closes his eyelids at night?

    are his knees tucked under them
    while he grips them good and tight?

    are his dreams filled with wonder of
    how good it feels to be with someone right?

    i want to know what he's like
    on a cold winter's night all
    alone with no one home
    for a special dinner by candlelight

    reciting him poetry during the late hours
    of night before he lays his head and goes to
    bed with only thoughts of kisses on his head

    i want to know...

    i wrote him poetry






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  2. Kimdricka

    Kimdricka Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow poet!! ;) i like your style.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    PD ........keep writting me poetry coz it makes me feel ummmm hummm!!
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh, yeah! i'm lovin' it! keep on scribin', baby sista'. very well done, pd.
     
  5. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    Thanx Kimdricka

    you're not bad yourself :lol:

    keep writing for us

    peace

    poeticd
     
  6. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    Richy Rich

    i'll keep writing poetry for all the fellas

    just stayed tuned after the commercial break :lol:

    one

    pd
     
  7. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    Lister

    you are the goddess of love poetry :lol:

    don't even trip! :)

    keep writing thanx for passing through

    peace

    pd
     
  8. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    **** PD
    i sure hope you find out poet

    FEELING YOUR WORK

    AGAIN

    DSS
     
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    amberly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is really great... i really like it. very nice
     
  10. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    thank you DSS

    i'll find out one of these days :lol:

    good looking out :toast:

    peace

    pd
     
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