Black Poetry : i write

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Sha'iyn, Jun 28, 2007.

  1. Sha'iyn

    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i write because it's right
    i like to shed some light
    on the melanated plight
    first to fly like Wright
    some of us stay in flight
    all day and all night
    but, to quench your thirst like Sprite
    come down like lightning strikes
    one day while flying kites
    i discovered a color bright
    green like malachite
    can't bring me down with cryptonite
    and no i don't wear blue and red tights
    i feel like a hero when i type
    must.. make.. every.. word precise
    sharp as a laser when i slice
    a young judaic knight
    dressed in black, no white
    despite my opponent's might
    his size, weight and height
    i'll pull him into Christ
    unless he's out of sight
    out of mind, in to fight
    i don't fool with these type
    my freedom has no fright
    so, i write what i like
     
  2. Yemoja'sGoddess

    Yemoja'sGoddess Banned

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    Well Now

    King Sha'iyn,

    I can hear your flow over a nice Neo~Soul beat... Soothing the righteousness of my spirit... Mass Fiyah Poet... Keep On...:star: :star: :star:
     
  3. Sha'iyn

    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful spirit

    akhnun, beautiful spirit
    i wish you more times like these
    enjoying verses back and forth
    every GODDESS deserves not to be spoiled
    but, rejuvinated with youthful kisses
    so, muah
    xoxoxoxoxoxo

    :kiss1:

    from Shuga Shane
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And make every word precise, you do. Enjoyed the rhyme scheme and freedom in the words you pose, poet.
     
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    Well, Then

    So Be It

    Write it out
    And print it
    There is no doubt
    That you should let it
    Even with a shout
    I know what ya talking about

    We will shoe'ly hear you out

    Good read. Thanks

    -Desert Storm
     
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    Yemoja'sGoddess Banned

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    Indeed


    I agree, every Goddess deserves to be rejuvenated and constantly elevated by a worthy King God by her side. Sadly, not enough Kings for the Queens, and not many able to wear the title. HOWEVER, I am humbled by your words and eternally blessed by your presence.:qqb018: Much Luv :hearts4:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    write on !
    tyte write
    it was pure delight
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    i love when poetry resembles art

    and you definitely hit that on this one

    feeling and loving the power of the pen here poet

    peace

    and keep writing it's good for the soul

    how's the baby?
     
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    He writes, he writes, he writes
    morning, noon, and nite
    his poetic appetite is
    dynamite
    just read the words
    He Writes...
    As long as you continue to write
    I shall continue to read
    Because I like, I like, I like
    How He Writes...

    Much Luv
     
  10. Sha'iyn

    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    proshate da luv

    i appreciate the moderators and spectators
    of this lovely sport
    I call it WallBall
    getting on a poetry wall and bawlin'!
    and when the ball stops spinning the players rest
    whoever picks up the ball is next
    and Nobody here is Best
    just getting better and better, yes

    THank You

    my son is in NY with his mother right now
    and he's growing fast... Allah has blessed me

    4everluv thank you for the beautiful words
    your love is truly divine
     
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