Black Poetry : I Write

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by hisili, Nov 2, 2004.

  1. hisili

    hisili Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I write becuz....
    i havnt seen my mama in three weeks
    I write becuz....
    my father iz actin everything but meek
    I write becuz....
    my clock is alwayz tickin tickin tickin
    I write becuz....
    my time iz alwayz slowly, slowly slippin
    I write becuz....
    I gotz no other way to express my feelings
    I write becuz....
    got tha perfect gurl right in front me
    I write becuz....
    might lose her ova another who aint even feelin me
    I write becuz....
    my brotha pushin that crack
    I write becuz....
    he just got out, cops tryna take him back
    I write becuz....
    it eases my soul
    I write becuz....
    keeps my heart from goin cold
    I write becuz my mind is overflowing wit thoughts bout my disease, my addiction, my friends, my family, .
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    write on and express da deep inside of ya heart
    write and let ya mental mind free
    write from da depth of ya soul
    write so ya heart won't go cold
    write and mold ya path
    write as u savor this and it last and last
    write ...........becuz u a poet !
    very nice poeticly Hisili.
     
  3. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ....A true poet
    Forever "Writes himself Free"....

    Loving this piece...
    Kudos,
    Sage
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Words to live by!

    much love for this inspiring peace ~
     
  5. hisili

    hisili Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    appreciate tha luv
    that i read abuv
    keeps me goin strong
    writin verse and song.
     
  6. THA HOOKUPMAN

    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    beautifully painted picture .........hookup :flamet: :flamet: :flamet: :flamet: :flamet:
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    keep writting bro...and welcome :wave:


    cause we are looking forward to ya ....



    and i liked youre short but straight and clear poem...






    Lovelibertylady:heart:
     
  8. MzMelanie2u2

    MzMelanie2u2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is so beautiful C...
    And the same reasons why your
    writing poetry,Are some of
    the reasons why I read it.
    It helps to calm my nerves, and
    most of the time it inspires me to be
    an even better poet. So thanks for share your
    heart and mind with me.
    "KEEP EM COMIN C"...1
    :kiss:
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very tight
    write head on....
     
  10. hisili

    hisili Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    more luv.. yall shouldnt hav, :) but im lovin this chance to express myself and b here with sum great poets and inspiring words.
     
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