Black Poetry : I write

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by caramelpython, Nov 8, 2003.

  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I Write

    My pain is as plain 2 see
    as the rain that falls on the plain in spain
    But the Pain in my brain is harder 2 see than my name
    Or this game that causes me to suffer like any other brother
    but my pain is only owned by this brother and none other

    So I Write

    I write in my book as the poem goes
    I write in only ways that a poet knows!

    I suffer but only my book shows the scars
    I write like a rapper over 16 bars.

    I write and my book seems to take on my physical form,
    The binder seems to breath and my pages feel warm.

    This pen transforms while in my hand,
    I blink and reopen my eyes as the tattoo man!

    Dam!!!

    So I write and transform my body into a work of art,
    Allowing my brain to explain my pain in each part.

    I write circles and squares,
    Plus faces of pleasure and dispair.

    Zig Zags and wings,
    Of angels and things.

    Chineese sayings
    Andclasped hands praying.

    I write all of this while inmy trance
    I write while my pen does this dance.

    My pain leaves theese scars that we call art,
    My pain is fuled by this heavy heart

    So I Write

    I write only as a poet knows how
    I write only as a poet knows how
    I write only as a poet knows how

    I write!

    So tell me....

    Can You Feel Me Now?

    Caramelpython 2003 ​
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmmm...i feel you on a poet thang..
    flow on this is tight...much love my brother:angel1:
     
  3. Hiclass_female

    Hiclass_female Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You have skillz, I am feeling this.
    Keep your flow going.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed well felt poetically
    let it flow feelin ya ......tyte eye openner
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome!

    Excellent Scribe...
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am def feelin u right now, yes indeed.
     
  7. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    get your write on then :toast:

    this one's tyte!

    jh
     
  8. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    j'hiah............ TY
    gempis..........TY 4 the feeling
    angelicsage....TY 4 the welcome it elt good
    $$RICH$$.... brother I am honored
    Hiclass_female......they say skills always reflect on the reciever
    mzblkangel......TY TY....Looking foward to more

    I hope I get a chance to work with all of you at sometime!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's your last day as poet of the week, so I looked for something to bring back. I missed this one somehow. It artistically describes how you write the way you do...Another truly talented scribe.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah i can feel this my goodness
    you are tight
    wonderful poet
    straight up
    Peace
     
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