Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by smoothsoul, Jan 14, 2007.
removed. no reason.
continue to write for da freedom u see
fight for this freedom for u and me
yes freedom for poverty streets
freedom of society sweep
continue as i bless u in arm
because this freedom surely a charm.....
Awesome scribe i felt all of this Smoothsoul
as well you should, keep doing your thing poet
I enjoyed everything about this, the pace, the rhyme, but most of all, he message. And yes if we can't be free within ourselves, can we truly be free? Awesome write.
Thank you all for taking the time out to peep and reply.
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