Quiet Poetry Lounge : I Would Rather Dance with Love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Dlovely, Dec 25, 2005.

  1. Dlovely

    Dlovely Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I must tell you
    I miss you...

    how
    continually
    you
    astound me
    affect me in ways
    that leave me perplexed

    how you make me
    ponder about love...

    just knowing you are there
    waiting on me
    makes thoughts
    aflutter

    I know you wrote that poem for me
    those beautiful words
    exposing your love,
    for me

    it can be tantalizing,
    can it not?
    love

    I told you,
    "I would rather dance with love
    waltz in the fire
    of her truth
    than to have never danced at all"

    I accept every possibility,
    every consequence...

    I wonder what it would be like
    in your arms?
    to push the envelope
    so far open
    we make history,
    you and I

    you told me,
    "that love
    will saunter up behind me,
    one day
    turning my world upside down"

    I think it might
    it is possible

    but then again
    you said,
    "you love it
    when I'm guarded"

    I feel different with you
    a complexion of openness,
    tenderness

    I will lay with you,
    you said,
    "side by side
    on a warm summer's night,
    talking,
    whispering
    up to the stars...

    picking out two of them
    making them ours"

    we blur each others take on love,
    cleansing
    purifying
    our hearts

    I find you
    in my
    thoughts
    daily,

    all
    day
    long...

    lingering!!
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That can be a wonderful feeling...always thinking about the one love in your life, nice flow poet
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    true love leaves a feeling like dis here dat cascade deep in thoughts
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thinking about love is like rerunning a scene in your mind, never getting enough of the replay. Very nice.
     
  5. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i love the flow on this one flow on poet.:kiss1:
     
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