Black Poetry : i would love to have you...

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  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i've often wondered...

    if the road i trod gets dark and dreary
    and skepticism makes me weak and weary

    who would i want at my side?

    one who's mentally stable
    capable of handling obstacles
    ...able-bodied

    is that you?

    or, maybe, a raging beauty
    to offset the duties
    that life's challenges
    throw my way

    maybe not this day...but someday

    would that be you?

    when i'm in the mood for loving
    STRONG AND CRUDE
    and i came to you
    would you understand
    (i'm only being a man)

    if you're the one...then

    i would love to have you
    swim in the shallows and depths of me, too
    to bathe in the PEACE of a meadow-like mind
    take walks along the beach of my mental...for a time

    i would love to have you
    to stroke the outer realm of my gentleness, too
    to share a kind moment of love...by the stream
    or breast stroke the rise and fall of manly things

    yes, i would love to have you.:)

    to kiss and caress you
    to bathe in twilight's evening dew
    immersed in the fragrant scent of you

    NO...i'm not through

    when we finish...with the champagne bubble bath
    i'll put you in a glass
    and take a stirring sip of you

    that's what i'd like to do

    swim in the shallow and depth of you

    and when the murky shadows of your existence
    raise its ugly head and hisses

    i'll be there for you.

    i would love to have you.
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    baller

    This is such a touching & dramatic piece..... definitely a re-read for 'absolute marination!' :)

    Lovin' it!!

    N2
     
  3. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS for allowing me N2...

    this small piece of you...so glad you enjoyed this mental taste of what could be...in some reality.:)

    THANKS for reading me.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Baller man

    dis here i ask often and wisely .........thankz
    for bringgin out what self feel....:cool:
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YOUR $$RICHNE$$

    thanks for feeling the river as it weaves in and out of reality's existence. maintain the friendly skies and continue the flight.

    One.
     
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