Black Poetry : I would and I will...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, Jan 18, 2004.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Id walk across the desert sand
    just to touch your hand
    Id carry the sun on my back
    to prove Im the one that
    can make love to your mind
    make you orgasm to my
    words, please believe I work wonders
    when it comes to activities under
    the covers
    Id hike the longest trail 'probly'
    to trail my tongue down your body
    I'd inhale burning flames
    to light your fire and tame
    the heat that you give off
    I'd take you on a plane ride
    buckle up and get ready for lift off
    I'd perform all type of foreplay
    to get you in the mood for more play
    I'd give up abstinence to become addicted
    to you so much that my momma gotta get me committed
    I'd learn how to play the organ
    so I can play your keys more than
    Alicia, til my fingers get knotted and swollen
    I'd eat chocolate delicacies so I can sweet talk you
    I'd exercise in marathons so my feet can learn to walk with you
    I'd live in your library
    Cuz these guys rarely
    read your mind like I can
    I'll read every page and understand
    your story, if you tell it to me right
    I dont need no fairytales tonight
    I'll stroke your strings
    if the lyrics you sing
    I'll put you to sleep, if its me you dream
    I'll make you agressive, if its my name you scream
    So what you wanna do? How much do u want me to bring?
     
  2. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow

    You have such a beautiful heart. The girl that gets you is going to be lucky.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was so sweet
    love da vibe u pose'd here
    do yo thang !
     
  4. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks yall...
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nicely posed
    what a heart...
    flow on my sister...

    Peace and Love
    Angel
     
  6. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh Oh WOW :D

    MmmmHmmmm...I think you laid it out...actually I take that back...i KNOW you laid it out lol
     
  7. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You always always turn a love poem into a LOVE poem! much love to you.
     
  8. phenomenalwoman

    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa not that was fire. good job
     
  9. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    word...
    you laid it out simple and plain
    on dis joint...me likes
    one love
    khasm