Black Poetry : i wont stop....

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Two steps up
    Three just went back…
    Release to go
    Never move..
    Comin up
    kick down
    Thrown away
    Pulled back
    Reachin
    Cant touch..
    Fire burn not
    to go out…
    Thirsty must drink…
    water not cold….
    Walls close in
    Ceilin fallen…
    Cant run nor hide….
    Cant give up now…
    To far from
    where I started from
    Not easy…
    But I be ok…..
    Didn’t bring me
    This far…
    Just to fall….
    Time release in da air…
    Pain is clear…
    Hurt can bare
    But hope not gone….
    I will be strong….
    Place inside is faith..
    For I never walk alone…
    Lift my head up
    I know the sun will shine soon… :angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hold faith
    the battle of the struggle
    is at hand but the love of
    the master will see you
    through
    we all at some point been
    push down
    toss aside
    mistreated
    but the strong will ova come
    such
    what seem to be deem
    will come forth light
    the sun most def will shine
    hold on and keep moving
     
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    I DIG that it was cool , truly felt, yessssssss :fairy:
     
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    i reach up,
    to the sky,
    tears drop,
    yes i cry,
    but i don't know why,
    so i make a sigh,
    cuz soon i will die,
    and pass by,
    those that lie.
    so hats off to you,
    for this flow that you do,
    cuz it can't be no more true,
    until my life is through,
    we'll stick together like glue,
    just like a jury or crew..............
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    see no matter how hard it gets...
    my faith is in me
    and i stand strong....
    see he didnt bring me this far to leave me...
    never said i wouldnt fall....
    never said it will all go the right way...
    but i lift my head up to the sky...
    and i cry alittle prayer..
    for i know he didnt leave me...
    so i must try to move on....
    as i do he guides me...
    and i stand stronger with in him....
    thank you fam for reading...much love....
    just an Angel makin her way the only way she know how....
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$Rich$$, More and lilcherry thanks for da read...
    much love yall....:angel1:
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am really feelin this, girl, and you put it together so well. Much love for this one.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for da read...much love girl..thank you
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I LOVE THIS! i feel like im on that road with you
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    swtt..i am glad you feel this...much love baby girl
     
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