Black Poetry : I Wonder~

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  1. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ~I thought~

    my heart and I had
    an understanding
    we agreed we'd lay low
    after that last love episode
    I was to maintain a level head
    cleverly redirect intimate dialogue


    ~My heart~

    well, was to secure our
    emotional perimeters
    we were on the lam~
    from Cupid's meddling arrow~~~~
    >

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    innocently he smoothly gains access,
    his words slow danced to the tune
    of Sweet Nothings in my ear
    with my heart beating backup
    my mind fell in sync.

    ~Harmoniously~

    his once ordinary smile
    developed into eye candy
    my eyes intensely craved

    *******************************************

    his french kiss~ah, so long and
    sweet inhaled my soberness rendered
    me helplessly under his control
    the mere sound of his voice
    transformed me into a school girl,
    with something more powerful than a crush
    this was a head on collision.


    I wonder.......
    ~could he and Cupid be in cahoots?~




    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    Cocoa !

    This peice is very cleanly done ...the battle of Heart and Mind...excellent subject matter expressed so eloquently !

    peace
    g-man
     
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    This was a very good read!
     
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    Cocoa!!

    I'm Loving this flow here!!
    Thanks for sharing!
    I can dig it!!
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gypsyman~ I appreciate your kind words. :)

    Rasad~ I'm glad you dug'it. :)

    Windwalker~ Glad you enjoyed the read. :)

    Thanks for the brothaly love.
    It's returned. :heart:

    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :lol: Gurl...I knew this poem fo I eva read it. What a wonderful piece on a sistah's weakness.

    Terrible tight!

    Joyce
     
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    loving this one
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well gosh darn it Coco...

    This was just a swell, swell read!!! :lol:

    Nah, on the serious though, you know this was straight kewl like that!!! Mos' def!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
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    Can't....

    get HIM...outta ma head

    I.....



    Can't...........get him.....




    outta my Head!!!


    Dammmmmnnnn...Cupid's workin it's majik!!!



    feelin this peace on da real Coco!!!
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Joyce~ :laugh: I'm glad you like it. :)

    Bishop~You feeling me? :)

    GQ~Swell? Thats a word I haven't heard for sometime. :laugh:
    I feel ya doh :)

    Afri~ Yeah, I see you feeling me aight. :D
    Nice flow. :)


    Thanks for the love yall.
    It's returned :heart:


    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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