Black Poetry : I Wonder...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LovelyGoldenOne, Feb 24, 2008.

  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Before me, I'm sure

    I'm sure there was somebody, who made

    Who made your heart beat in ways

    In ways that I do now

    Before me, I'm sure

    I'm sure you loved somebody, who was

    Who was the brightest star in

    In your past time world


    And now I'm sitting here thinking of you baby

    And I'm wondering if she ever crosses your mind

    And now I'm sitting here wondering baby

    If you ever wish that you could go back in time

    And now I'm sitting here thinking of you baby

    Do you regret anything now in your life?

    And now I'm sitting here wondering baby

    I'm wondering if you ever cross her mind


    You say that

    That I'm the only one that you love, and I

    And I ain't gonna argue with that fact tonight

    But sometimes I think back to the past relationships

    That made me

    Molded me

    Prepared me for the love you give me


    And now I'm sitting here thinking of you baby

    And I'm wondering if she ever crosses your mind

    And now I'm sitting here wondering baby

    If you ever wish that you could go back in time

    And now I'm sitting here thinking of you baby

    Do you regret anything now in your life?

    And now I'm sitting here wondering baby

    I'm wondering if you ever cross her mind


    I've been to heaven before with somebody

    And I remember the past but I wouldn't give this up if I had the chance to go back

    I've been to hell and back with somebody

    Been heartbroken, stomped on, deceived and left to pack


    But you were there to comfort me, lift me up and take care of me

    And you were there to make me laugh, take it slow and show me love

    But you were there to comfort me , lift me up and take care of me

    And you were there to make me laugh, take it slow and show me happiness


    And now I'm sitting here thinking of you baby

    And I'm wondering if she ever crosses your mind

    And now I'm sitting here wondering baby

    If you ever wish that you could go back in time

    And now I'm sitting here thinking of you baby

    Do you regret anything now in your life?

    And now I'm sitting here wondering baby

    I'm wondering if you ever cross her mind


    So baby

    Does she ever cross your mind from time to time?

    Honestly

    Do you ever wish you could go back in time?

    Baby

    Do regret letting anybody go from your life?

    Tell me

    Don't wanna hear no beautiful lies...
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Sis
    I guess i least once in our
    lives we wonderful about
    the things you have spoken of for sure.
    Very lovely flow sis. I can feel
    the time youput into this piece
    to get it just right.
    Nice. Very nice.much love

    Peace~N~Love
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Bluewater :)
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What this made me think of, was when you have this inkling that something is just not quite right, and you need to be assured that everything is fine. Great to read you again LovelyGoldenOne.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling u on this one and surely it had my head on alert
     
  6. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    please go with what's good

    don't wear yourself out

    you can NEVER know what someone else is truly thinking

    if it's good please leave well enough ALONE

    and if it isn't good then just leave

    i know we need reassurances sometimes

    and sometimes you just have to ride the horse while you can

    peace

    i love your piece here

    and your passion

    but if it's good leave it right there
     
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