Black Poetry : I wonder

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Mr marion, Aug 20, 2001.

  1. Mr marion

    Mr marion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I wonder if you know how I really feel about you
    How I am constantly thinking of you
    How I initially fell in love with you
    I wonder....

    I wonder if you know the reasons in college I feed you
    You needed a place I gave bed to you
    washed your clothes
    did your homework --dropped you off to work
    I wonder......

    I wonder if you know that when you’re around I get layers of goose bumps -- then somehow you always seem to have to whisper
    and breathe on my neck
    I wonder......

    I wonder if you know that I do all that I do for
    you because I'm in love you
    I wonder.....

    I wonder if you’re secretly in love me too or just taking my love for granted

    I wonder.......
     
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    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice...!

    ...people really do not realize the depth of feelings, i think...
    you do all that is within you and stilll...the other does not realize
    just how much...

    nice flow~
     
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    hmm...
    sometimes, if you really
    wanna know... you have
    to say it/ask it out loud...
    nice piece.
    -7
     
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    Wonderment makes a fella go...hmmmm!!!!

    Nice *** vibe Mr M!!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
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    Mr,

    I've wondered. I think we all have. This was very nice. Thanks.

    Madd Sistahly Love:heart:
    CCBSKYN
     
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    nice flow my brother. i feel you!! keep flowing in the vein - it's righteous!
     
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    MSD--Thanks.. Thats very true
    Wildflower7--A fear of rejection sometimes
    GQ--It's a big thrill
    Coco-- Not as much as me
    Klabarron--Straight from the soul
    Cindy--It's a him and he's been my best friend for 5 years...ooh and he's "Straight" as well
     
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    Mr marion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cindy it does make a difference.
    I will never want to do anything to
    push him away. Unless he showed signs
    of being interested in same-sex relationships, I would
    never feel comfortable telling him.
    I see it as a situation I'll just wonder about until
    he comes on to me.....
     
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