Black Poetry : i wonder...

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  1. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I wonder…
    Can dreams drop from my subconscious?
    Taking the form of life, sight and sound
    Incarnating itself into my reality?

    I wonder…
    Can life bring more joy than pain when
    Pain is just the stepping stones to give
    Us strength to handle and seek the joy?

    I wonder…
    Will the laughter of children ever bring
    The true innocence that rings from their
    Hearts to flood this corruptible land?

    I wonder…
    When people ask why love hurts,
    Have they ever really experienced love
    Or just some manifestation of seduction?

    I wonder…
    If you have read this far will your questions
    Carry beyond the page into a place where
    More questions cause you to change?

    I wonder….
     
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    That was beautifully laid Brother!

    And I wondered where and how youv'e been?
    Haven't seen you around!

    It's good to see you! (smilin)

    loving your scribe!!!!!!
     
  3. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i've been resting in the tall grass and planting seed for the garden to grow...

    forgive me for being away so long, but the rest was needed...

    thank you for the support...
     
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    i loved it!!!!
    i likes your style
    just glad ya back....ben missing ya
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    dnommo

    obviously the planting and tending the garden have brought forth a beautiful garden..very nice piece...makes me think..and hope..and wonder
     
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    I really like your stlye keep scribing you are very talented
    nice!!!!
     
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    indeed tyte drop brutha love ya pen
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all

    it has been a minute but i am still around aND KICKIN' i hope to post more soon...

    i am honored by all your words and the welcome...

    one.
     
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    Welcome back home...Poet!!!!!
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it's good to be home...thanks for the read
     
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