Black Poetry : I Wonder

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bluewater, Apr 26, 2004.

  1. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh it would indeed be a pleasure
    To introduce you to the
    Southern Hospitality of me
    To invite you into my house
    Of
    Intimates
    I wonder if you would be please
    To slip into my fantasy
    And nest in the warmth of ecstasy
    In my garden under a shaded tree
     
  2. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    BlueWater...

    good GOD, woman. What are you trying to do to me? I'm at work. :D

    mmm...mmm...mm mm mm. All I can do is :D at the moment. You know how to get to a brotha quick. :D

    I'm gleaming with joy from reading this piece. The essence of woman you have reminded me. Thank you. :bowdown:

    :thanks: for sharing a part of you with us.

    :toast:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    knock me out the sky
    o' yes i love to sit in
    ya fantasy of embrace
    and trace da essence
    of ya heart and the orbs
    of ya soul in the esctacy
    of love in ya sweet nest
    cozy warmth felt here
    on my way if u allow me
     
  4. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like this piece made me think of the summer time make me wanna sing Carl Thomas "Summer Rain":lol:
     
  5. turtle1

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    :idea: SEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    SISTA BLUE!!!!!!!!!!!
    YOU BE TRYING TO MAKE A BROTHER MELT!!!!!!!!
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice intimate word play. Really liked the smooth flow of it.
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    smooth sista very smooth
     
  8. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    nice smooth joint sista...
    this just slide in da door...
    one love
    khasm
     
  9. gempis

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    yo it kills me that everyone's using smooth to describe this beauty of a piece, cuz that is THE right way to talk about it! very nice joint, my sister.
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You entice me with such majesty!
     
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