Black Poetry : I Wonder

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, Jun 10, 2003.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i read her words almost every week, its almost like she's speakin to me
    Like she's callin my name and tellin me sumthin but im too ignorant to comprehend
    her message is plain and clear, she's lookin for love as so am i
    she's been thru a lot and her pen is her resolution
    i guess you can say so far we have a lot in common
    its weird cuz i get this vibe from her
    and ive never even seen the sight of her
    something about her name makes me curious, its soft and so unique
    she doesn't even know her intentions
    we've chopped it up a couple of times, but it never got too far
    compliments were given and days were talked about, but thats about it
    i dont know what it is or how to explain this connection
    but ****... i wonder if she feels it too.
    her
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is so heartfelt....wow....i had to read it a couple of times...


    so who is this girl???
     
  3. poeticlyspeakin

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    wont we all wonder.... she might know who she is.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feel ya here hummmmmmmmm!
    what's in common with u
    and looking for love so true
    well i'll be gurssing who!
     
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    <~~~~~~so nosy..Heck poet, I wanna know too ! :)
     
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    awww man...that's not fair. You're lucky that was absolutely beautiful or i'd be upset with you. :)
     
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    I like this poet and I know who you are talking about and I bet that she is very flattered :) I'm so sorry I've been so busy lately I hope to speak to you soon tho because I like to just you kno hear what's up on your part of the world and I like the way you think until then keep flowin and hittin me up with somethin new :)
     
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    SERENTI...I love you, but don't come in here braggin' when you know we all want to know...LOL
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol. aiight. i think u might know who she is too.
     
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    ok, i feel better.
     
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