Black Poetry : I wonder-song

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  1. lyricallyspeakn

    lyricallyspeakn New Member MEMBER

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    He used to tell me
    that i was beautiful
    He used to tell me
    It was me who he adored
    we were so happy
    two love birds deep in love
    thought id never see the day that id be praising him above

    chorus

    I wonder if he hears me cry at night
    I wonder if he feels my hurting pain
    I wonder if hes doing fine
    Oh my love please come and take me out the rain

    we were so blinded
    blinded by our love
    we were so happy with our first and new born son

    but know im so all alone
    Oh, lord why'd you break this happy home

    Chorus

    we were together
    together for all those years
    but now im crying
    crying lonely tears
    my love i miss you
    and wish that you were here

    I wonder if he hears me cry at night
    I wonder if he feels my missing pain
    I wonder if hes just doing fine
    Oh lord why' d you have to take our love away
    chorus
     
  2. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is beautiful lyric, very artistic
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well posed i loved it
     
  4. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is a HIT!

    Lovin this. Not only is it HOT ISH, but I feel your pain in this lyric!!
    Keep on flowin babygirl
     
  5. Rico

    Rico Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was a beautiful and moving piece.
    Much Love
    Rico.
     
  6. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    VERY nice lyrics...i write songs too...i like this alot:D
     
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