Black Poetry : I wonder if he knows..

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  1. ladybug

    ladybug Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I wonder if he knows
    Exactly what I am about
    Cause every time I’m around him
    I tend to freak “me” out
    I act all elementary
    And loss my thought for words
    I never seem to sit still
    And my hands are even worse
    My mind runs at the rate of lightning speed
    Of all the things I would do for “he”
    If only he would allow me
    To give him the “best” of me
    I can’t keep focus as I stare into his eyes
    And wonder what he thinks of me
    Or if I am even on his mind
    I wish I could hold my composure, in his presence
    Even if just for awhile, so that he can feel my essence
    So that he can have the chance
    To really see what I am all about
    Then maybe I won’t have to scream and shout
    Although attention is not what I need
    Hell I just want to know is he feelin’ me
    I would love to talk to him and just
    Let “it” be but the mere sight of him
    Just set’s me free
    Free from all boundaries I have placed upon myself
    And limitations that seem to be…….
    Man I just wonder if he knows
     
  2. midnightsson

    midnightsson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the right man will see he "lack of composure" as what it is....attraction...sweetie, i say tell him if theres any doubt...dont let those feelings go unvoiced...who knows, he could be going through the same....
     
  3. poeticdelight

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    smooth

    welcome back ladybug :welcome:

    keep writing

    :toast:

    pd
     
  4. Poetic Pride

    Poetic Pride Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like this peace because I'm almost going through the same situation. I went on a date for Valentine's Day and I hadn't seen this man for almost 5 yrs. So, it was kinda hard to connect with him again, but I would just get all nervous and a stomach of butterflies when I was around him. Yet, on the other hand, I didn't have to hold my composure for too long. I just let go and let him know how I felt about him and why I was so nervous and shaky around him, which was quite obvious.
     
  5. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is a heartfelt piece.

    I've been there...
    years ago I never
    uttered a word.
    Til this day I will always
    believe that was a mistake.


    souldeep!
    Coco
    :heart:
     
  6. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Vivid

    You described this whole vibe so well!
     
  7. ladybug

    ladybug Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you thank you thank yall! this one came from within....i am actually beginning to open up to another after all this time and i am acting like a school girl....guess that is how it be sometime
     
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