Black Poetry : I woke you on purpose

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  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello love. Did you sleep well?
    I have been up for a moment.
    Looking at how beautiful you look.

    I can’t help but tell you.
    I am in awe with your inner beauty.
    I’m glad you woke up. This gives us
    a few moments before we have to start our day.

    I want to hold you.
    Slide over here.
    Lay on my chest.

    Let me share something.
    I have never said.
    I want to say again.
    How much I love you.
    What you do to me
    makes me feel so good.

    Don’t stop me from rubbing my fingers thru your hair.
    I just want to touch you.

    You make me feel. :hot:
    I know I am truly blessed
    to be loved by you.
    You’re more than physical beauty.
    Your deep penetrating eyes spear my soul.
    I see something deep in you.
    I can fall into forever.

    Makes me nervous, not that I have something to fear.
    It’s a good thing that you look at me that way.
    It confirms how much you love me.
    Don’t say a word… just let me continue to kiss you.
     
  2. bigdrizzle

    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well articulated, my brotha....Great Read!
     
  3. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks BIG

    Welcome to Destee!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now that....was pure beauty. The love just genuinely dripped from your pen. Cherish that love brotha, you are blessed.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This poem warmed my entire heart, it pleases and brightens my world, to see two people in love, and have no problen show/telling it to the world.
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Brotha, you expressed the emotion so vividly in this I could see it happening in my imagination and that's not something I see or read about everyday keep it going strong my brothta this was nothing short of beautiful.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    cherishing a mate...i remember them days likes this right here....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautifully expressed of love so pure and warm how i can relate.
    awesome write bruh !
     
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    lilcutie Active Member MEMBER

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    True love. I love it! lol. hot. do what you do cause i love what you do.
     
  10. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    A REAL MAC OK SOLDIER
    I FEEL YOU SUAVE HERE

    I WONDER DOES SHE KNOW HOW LUCKY SHE IS THAT SOMEBODY REALLY CARES FOR HER IN THIS WAY

    PEACE
    DSS
     
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