Black Poetry : ...i wish

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MsDLite, Feb 4, 2001.

  1. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i wish
    you would just hold me
    ...letting me feel the warmth
    of your body
    ...feel your manly curves
    ...being symbiotic


    i wish
    you would just say
    simple things like...
    "hi baby"
    "call you later sweetie"
    "kiss me"
    "you taste sooo good"
    "you make me smile"
    "i love you"
    ...i wish

    i wish
    you would just hold
    my hand
    not speak a word
    and look into my brown
    eyes...
    ...so we could communicate silently

    there are many other wishes i have...

    i wish
    that what we make
    so complex
    could be made very easy
    between us...

    i just...wish

    MsDLite (c) 02.01
     
  2. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i wish...

    i could bask, daily
    in the love of you
    relieving stress
    by the things we do

    i wish...
    i could be at your side
    forever and a day
    get lost in your voice
    ...those sweet words you say

    i wish.
     
  3. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...we all have

    wishes...

    some that never come true...
    yet, we keep wishing...
     
  4. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel you....
    I wish so so often myself sometimes :wave:
     
  5. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    to wish it
    to want it
    is how we will get it

    :)

    Wish On My Sista!

    Destee
     
  6. blackbelle

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    Your gifts are amazing...that you could turn something as simple as a wish into this beautiful poetic reality

    I wish you knew how much you moved me

    *falling-stars*

    a blackbelle edition
     
  7. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *bringing back the classics on j'hiah's (great) platinum wall of poets* :wink:

    where oh where is she??
     
  8. womanopoly

    womanopoly New Member MEMBER

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    this is a beautiful poem...it is speaking to my very situation
     
  9. choclatangel

    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I loved this, I was feeling this way only a short while ago...but now my wishes have become reality.
     
  10. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice write sistah!:roll:
     
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