Black Poetry : I Wish

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Mar 16, 2008.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I want to be
    Your sweet lover

    Like strawberry wine
    I want to caress
    The small of your back

    Then press your lips to mine
    Anything we do
    Would not be enough

    My sweet peach
    My girl
    You create in me
    Only you and I can be

    I wish
    I want to
    Always be
    In your world.

    :hearts2:
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And what a sweet wish that is Hodee. Lovely write brotha.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Close your eyes and make a wish...slowly open them, and she will appear!!
    sweet piece poet.
     
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    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sweet doesnt even describe this piece...delectable! Excellent poet!
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sweet peach huh? this girl inspire some floetic flows from your pen.......enjoyed very much Hodee!:SuN030:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesomely well done wishing upon that sensual star
     
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