Quiet Poetry Lounge : I wish to write like you

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by choclatangel, Aug 26, 2006.

  1. choclatangel

    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    For RICH

    Reading and rereading line after line
    of piece after piece of poetry
    because it all came together so hotly
    stretching across time
    and down generations
    images brain titalating
    reflecting inner turmoils and greatness
    twisting love, politics, life into
    one tightly laced neat masterpiece
    rendering the readers mind struck
    admiring
    your work and envying your pen
    for you can write on any subject
    and touch others within
    never forgetting emotion
    nor imagery
    wanting, needing, hoping
    to write with your pen
    maybe then
    I'd be a walking, talking, breathing poem
    the yang to your yen
     
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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ahh, that was sweet. You expressed you admiration for RICH beautifully. He is Mr. Wonderful, my hats off to you and him
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank you Phenomenalwoman for that warm embrace of thee.

    Choclatangel... From what u scribed you are of me as i am of you
    we are that we are and surely your a poetic wire walking this made
    me feel i belong and very good inside i humble thank you from da
    depth of my heart surely we have to pen something together in collab
    love you dearly
    Da $R
     
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    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks $Rich$ that means a lot coming from you. I just wanted to show how much I look up to you. And thanks for stopping by phenomenal.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most welcome indeed and remember we have a collab date.
     
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