Black Poetry : I Wish This Were True

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  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i could take care of you like a mother

    and tease you like a little brother

    if there is another

    who can move your soul like i can, then there have got to be other

    girls walking around

    maybe even in my Knoxville town

    that can move me into making joyous sounds

    from my heart



    love,

    howard
     
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    these writes of yours seem like personal letters. thanks for allowing me to come into your world.:love: :love:
     
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    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i appreciate your comments and your right they are :toast:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u have wayz with words bruh this was another tyte joint
     
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    This was hott bruh
    Much love poet
    You keep it smockin
     
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    TIGHT DROP CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE HOPE YOU KEEP COMING FROM THE HEART
     
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    Yes, this does read like a love note, very sweet drop.
     
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    Very sweet, I enjoyed this:hearts2:
     
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