Black Poetry : I WISH THAT I COULD GIVE YOU SOMETHING.......

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  1. SAARONCROWELL

    SAARONCROWELL Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If we were to take a walk..just as friends~
    ..Not holding hands, nor gazing longingly into...
    One another's eyes,..as~
    ..We may make stops along the way...

    And during supposed pause, were we~
    ..To discover ourselves...
    Standing before a field of flowers~
    ..Of an assorted variety, abundantly beautiful...

    Wild, exotic, fragrant, colorful~
    ..To the point of utter intoxication...
    Were we to stroll into the midst of it all~
    ..There's just one thing, I'd like to know:

    Would you, think me presumptuous~
    ..Were I to take your hand...
    Kiss your palm, and hold it to my cheek~
    ..Pull you closer to me, and...

    With my index finger tucked tenderly~
    ..Beneath your chin...
    To tilt your lovely face up towards me~
    ..So that I may KISS you...
    Ever so gently, on the nose!!

    ...................SAARONCROWELL...................
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  2. YeshuJah

    YeshuJah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so sweet..

    so visually sweet. The image is a nice one. Thanks for sharing it.

    One Love.
     
  3. Destee

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    aawwww this is too sweet
    you have given me much
    when giving me this

    thank you

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  4. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    there is

    a time when permission, so sweetly requested, can only be answered with a tender, breathless, 'yes'...

    at a time like that ~ "presumption" fades quickly into a mutual reality.

    this is "pretty love" ~ like I like it! Thank you

    A
     
  5. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How could she resist this dog? Nice visuals & verbage...

    Respect
    Reas
     
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