Black Poetry : i wish i could go back

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  1. poeticwordstris

    poeticwordstris Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i sumtimes wish i could go back,
    back when love really meant sumthing;
    becuz now and days love has so many definitions.
    i don't quite understand how getting hit or bruised is a sign of love.

    now and days love is shown in sum strange *** ways.
    like you ever heard a guy say oh she's just a friend,
    when she's the main gurl he's sleeping with.

    i sumtimes wish i could go back,
    back when love really meant sumthing
    because now and days love has so many definitions.

    i sumtimes wish i could go back,
    you know when love really meant something,
    you know how it use to be,
    all peaches and cream.

    like back when marriage really meant til death do us part,
    and all that good lovey dovey stuff.
    back in the day when the werds i love you were enuff.


    to be continued.......
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    now dis hit home
    love today is a word
    has less meaning
    back then it was bond
    to love and hold

    yesssssss! feel ya
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i heard ya....on all levels. me n love.....wow tyte srcibe....
     
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    Rico Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was nice...I feel ya...I was just thinking about that today..
     
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    poeticwordstris Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx yall alot:)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thank u for expressing it out loud
     
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