Black Poetry : I WILL WRITE,FOR FREEDOM

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  1. FINDLOVEINME

    FINDLOVEINME Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MY writing will never be constricted or restricted
    I will write, if though MY life depended on every word that I thought
    I will write if though, I was fighting for my freedom
    I will write words demanding me, to be set FREE

    I will write so that everyone will be able to read and understand, and not be
    intimidated by
    over educated words that are not necessary to convey intelligence
    or importance to be understood, nor are they necessary to express life in it simplicity

    I will write about love, joy, sacrifices, pain, insanity, patience, tolerance and freedom, because this is what I know

    I will write knowledge into my words
    and give
    Strength and power into the minds of my readers

    I will write my tears into the pain I feel
    And
    I will write Faith and courage into the heart of the lonely

    I will write about truth, my truth
    and
    I will dare you to feel the truth within yourself

    Prepare yourself emotionally and mentally,
    because
    I will write without shame, or disgrace, I will not always reveal life truth with tenderness
    But,I will write so
    my honesty will represent the strength in my spirit
    and
    My words will always represent the honesty in my soul

    I will write so my words may heal, love, teach and inspire all, not to be enslave to thyself or anyone else

    FOR FREEDOM,
    I WILL WRITE, TRUTH

    © Copyright 2004 by FINDLOVEINME
     
  2. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i likes.... thanks for sharing this one wit us...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up love the reality of this flow
     
  4. FINDLOVEINME

    FINDLOVEINME Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you daroc and rich
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    likes this drop....
     
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    FINDLOVEINME, you are a great poet
    I hope you know it
    Takes a true poet to show it
    If you write for freedom
    Then continue to do it, keep tellin' em'
    No bettah yet, show em'!!!!!!!!
     
  7. FINDLOVEINME

    FINDLOVEINME Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANK FOR SHOWING ME LOVE, WHEN IT COMES TO MY WRITING, SOMEDAYS I WISH THAT I COULD REACH THROUGH THIS SCREEN AND GIVE NOTHING BUT HUGS OF THANKS
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    CAN NEVER BE FREE, GET CLEVER GEE, GOD RULES AND MAN'S GARBAGE, ODD FOOLS WITH PLANS NO KNOWLEDGE THE EVIL IS IN CHARGE THE ILLEGAL IS CAMUOUSFLAGE HUH! YOU BEEN FREED AS A JOKE HELD DOWN BY CREED OF YOUR OWN FOLKS STAND UP AND FACE REALITY IT'S A DISGRACE LIKE FATALITY
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, I certainly do feel the truth in your poetry. Keep flowing this way poet.
     
  10. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    :wave: Hello and Welcome FINDLOVEINME :wave:

    Yes Yes Yes !!!! With talent like yours ... WRITE WRITE WRITE !!!

    This was a wonderful read ... thank you for sharing!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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