Black Poetry : I Will Remain

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by renee31127, Aug 30, 2003.

  1. renee31127

    renee31127 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You were the thing keeping me sane
    The main reason I was still happy
    So I’m trying to contain these feeling that I’m dealing with
    To maintain my composure
    Try to keep my cool
    So you couldn’t se the pain you were causing me
    But you knew what you were doing
    Your sorries became a regular occurrence
    So I remained as you tried the explain why you keep treating me the way you do
    I knew that you loved me but every argument just made me want to be through with you
    But as much as I tried I just couldn’t let go
    And I shouldn’t let go, because I have too much invested in us
    I’m not willing to give up, to just quit
    Cause you and I, we just fit together
    I don’t want to be with out you, and I’m not going to
    But every word I speak just seems to go in one ear and out the other
    Like there’s nothing in between
    Like you can’t hear what I’m telling you
    Or maybe you’re just not listening
    I can shout the same thing 14, 15, 16 times
    And it still doesn’t seem to get through
    I don’t have to be near you, to feel you
    My feelings don’t just disappear when I’m not beside you
    But I know you think they do
    Did you ever sit back to entertain the fact that maybe I do really love you
    And you can keep comparing me to ever girl you ever knew
    But what it comes down to is that I’m not them
    I know we can’t keep going on this way
    So I sit and I pray that one-day we’ll just be happy
    Then maybe everyday can be like the first
    Everything was so perfect at the start
    Cause you stole my heart, with the first words you spoke to me
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow! let it be known dis was sweetly pose'd
    continue da flow
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    like your flow keep it coming
     
  4. Jazz4u

    Jazz4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i feel u...deeply
    loved the flow
    j.
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey gurl...u had me wit u from the beginning to the end :)
     
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    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Me too. I love it, so honest and real
     
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