Black Poetry : I Will Not Dream

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  1. renee31127

    renee31127 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The only time were together it seems
    Is in my dreams
    MIles apart
    But never closer
    Then when I'm asleep
    Warm in my bed
    We danced under the moonlight
    Walked across sandy beaches
    Floated down the streets of Venice
    We would go wherever my dreams would take us
    He spoke to me in my dreams
    So that when I awoke
    It was he that was on my mind
    His face etched into my subconscious
    His scent as fimiliar to me as my own
    But now he is within my reach
    WIth hopeful desire that what I'm living right now is not a part of my night's dream
    I pinch myself to make sure that I'm awake
    It is now my reality
    I no longer have to dream
    Dreams are for those afraid to just live
    I will not dream anymore
    They are not for me
    Because right now I have everything I could dream of
     
  2. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    i liked your love and dreams which did come true..and how you shared it
    in the flow..
    I hope you will continue to dream..
    of other good things tho..

    its. nice when dreams come true...
     
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    Wel, dreams do come true! This is touching, dreamng of love and what it can bring. Nice.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so beautiful and dreams are made to become reality
    happy to read your where u lone to be very nicely done
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dreams do come true.....nice drop
     
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    When those dreams do come true, and occassionally they do, what a delightful bliss it is. Lovely flow.
     
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    indeed i had to bounce back coz they do come true wooooweeeeee!
     
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    monad.poetress Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was beautiful. Dreams do come true. To wake up and everything is as heavenly as it was in the dream is beautiful.


    ***Monad.poetress
     
  9. renee31127

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    Thank you all so much. Haven't written in a while or been on here like I should, so it good to have some love!
     
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    Ah, so nice to see you back, girl. This is a beautiful flow.
     
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