Black Poetry : ...i will NEVER....

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    another song...


    VERSE 1:

    a dark dwelling place is what i have in mind
    three years of this pain just makes loose my mind
    all because of me letting you come in and slide
    your way through my life inch by inch into my life

    how and the hell can you even state you name?
    knowing all the **** you said caused me dire pain?
    your abuse was far worse than any physical pains
    and right now God is the only love i need to obtain

    please don't come here with you f*cked up tears
    crying out to me to come wipe away your fake fears
    i don't give i [email protected] how much you're gonna kneel and beg
    cuz i'm just gonna laugh while fallin' all off my bed


    CHORUS:

    its about time you found out
    how it feels to be locked out
    in a place where your dying
    and your not even trying

    its about time you found out
    how its feels to be unloved
    all my weeping has got out
    the same is with you...OUT!

    how you gonna say i hurt you?
    when you hurt me with purpose to
    make me break down
    cry and collapse on ground
    its about time you found out


    VERSE 2:

    the first year was so beautiful and so happy
    then i don't what happened all the way to year three
    it like you began to quietly depise me
    just because i was doin' things in my life nicely

    yeah i graduated and went to college too
    a full scholarship helped me get a nice job too
    while you're sittin at home just watchin the tube
    with jealously building its way up inside you

    until one day you couldn't take it anymore
    you just had to feel your ceased power once more
    so you began by calling me degrading names
    cutting me so deeply that i cried out your name

    i can't believe i even dealt with that ****
    thinking that to you only i had to commit
    i was young and so naive i have to admit
    because now i would NEVER put up with that ****


    (CHORUS AGAIN)


    BRIDGE:

    if you really wanted to cut me
    so bloodily and knife deep
    with out using you hands or anything
    just using you words verbally
    i will say that at first you did succeed
    until i realized that your not what i need
    so i will NEVER trust so vulneralbly
    and right now i'm living independently


    (CHORUS AGAIN)
    fades out

    :argue:
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sing it girl...
    i feel your pain and the vibe...
    nice drop...
    love ya...:angel1:
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks girl:)....just some feelin's i had to get out...
     
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    i so know what ya mean i been there myself....:grouphug: :angel1:
     
  5. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :spinstar: i'm glad u understand :spinstar:
    :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow...............deep emotions singing
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks rich....i don't really think its deep....just really emotional.....but i'm past that stage in my life now.....thankfully... :heart:
     
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    indeed sistah indeed
     
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    the songwrite is back!!! missed you girl:kiss: nice song:)
     
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