Black Poetry : i will never cheat on you...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by j'hiah, Oct 27, 2002.

  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i have had my share of "samples"...
    but i dare not make you such an example...
    so when i utter words like "queen you're everything" or "i've never loved to this infinite degree" , believe me and do not trample these jewels of my lips
    which were influenced by you for i love you and only you
    thinking of you
    longing for you
    wanting you
    to understand i want to marry you....

    i am not your past but then again i am
    for i am your present- the one you were seeking but could not find...
    and so they did not realize the treasure at the ocean's floor...
    what people see of you i see more
    and when they honor you about anything
    i'm thinking "i'm glad she'll be wearing my engagement ring."

    but then it became real
    when you asked me if i'd ever cheat on you??

    i would cheat myself out of God's gift
    if i ever were to act ignorantly
    knowing that i don't deserve you if it had not been for His grace...
    the day i looked at your face i knew that both of our pasts had been erased
    and then we both could start anew as though
    we both were reborn...
    i would be so torn to lose you
    i am not one to use you ..
    i would lay down my life
    i would lay down my life
    i would lay down my life for you my future wife...

    no, i will never cheat on you.
     
  2. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    simply

    beautiful :heart:
     
  3. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well that's a hellofa way to answear the question.
    very smooth poetry
     
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    brother,

    that's the only way to put it down in scribe. the only way.

    10

    blak
     
  5. wildflower7

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    this wasn't a smooth poem, it was real
    it was the truth
    it's exactly what life needs.... -7:spinstar:
     
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    jughead.


    now... this!? ...this heah is what i'm talkin' 'bout!

    laid down like a true gentleman Don.... & i am
    feelin' your flow... deep! btw...

    (sangin')
    you loove me... you loove me!! :lol: :tongue:

    itsallnfinite, chile.

    elayne.
     
  7. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx all...

    yes, including you elayne :D
    btw,
    you love me more girrirl :jawdrop:
     
  8. poeticdelight

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    i read this one too

    real touching...

    pd
     
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    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    J'hiah -






    (this time I am speechless)
    :heart:'d it
     
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    This is the purity of love in all of it's strength...i enjoyed this.
     
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