Black Poetry : I Will Never Be the Same Again

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  1. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your voice
    Your thoughts
    The beat of your heart
    Has touched me
    In away

    (I will never be the same again)

    You’ve
    Reached down deep
    Into the depth of my soul
    Igniting
    A sun rise
    A fresh morning
    A new life
    Filled with that
    Missing desire
    That was bury
    Behind brick walls
    Forgotten
    Not lost
    Missing
    Never gone
    You are that mallet
    That freed
    The spirited
    The soft side of me
    So diligently

    (I will never be the same again)

    Replacing that mallet
    With a beat of distant
    Drums. That haunts my soul
    Firing a wanton hunger
    Of passion
    No longer is it tame
    You have rescue my heart
    Taking my hand
    The affectionate of your warm lips
    Outline my temple
    Eyes
    Lips
    Throat
    The blood that flows
    Through my veins
    Swells the pulse
    Of my throbbing heart
    Holding me firm not letting go
    Here is where I belong

    Your gentle touches
    Lovingly, kindly, comfort me
    I am a woman
    In love and loved

    (I will never be the same again)
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, this was such a beautiful testimony of love. This was a breath of fresh air.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Like silent whispers
    rdiant love a meaning
    of hope from above
    the way u smile
    dance in my head
    like a love i never had
    from the rapture of
    sweet release
    my heart beats
    my feast on the moment
    of thoughts u pose
    and to me ur a rare Rose
    opening up a desire
    a bliss of love
    the motion of
    twist lips of savior
    the sweet flava
    the way u walk
    how u talk
    been bottle up
    not coverd
    but ready to pop

    see not the same again

    from deep within i feel
    the Queen u are and the
    heart u bring whispers of
    words how they sing
    ya compassion of affection
    ya comfort of caress
    taste like da cascade
    kissing the starz
    ur radiant tender gentle
    touchmove me to perfection

    coz i'll never be the same again

    deeply holding this feast
    in my heart as my soul open
    and on my mind u lay
    nothing more i can say
    but i wuv u through & through

    dis was so awesome my pen took off on it's own ...wow
    u go sistah bluewater write it, scribe it and release it ...
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this reads like a sweet melody :) lovely my sista
     
  5. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi sister watzinaname thank you so much for the love sis..:)

    Hi brother $$RICH$$ oh my goodness I am just loving your flow...wow...my brother thank you:luv:

    Hi sister triniti thank you so muchsis..i am happy you like ..:)
     
  6. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I keep reading u and I find that I will never read the same and from that U will never be the same either! U keep doing it Blus and I'm feeling u. :tongue:
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow...Sister Blue...

    Excellent piece here...

    I was just imagining ....still waters
    and how when you touch them
    and they ripple...(never the same again)

    Bravo!
     
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    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wonderful

    it flows so well... great imagery... wonderful piece
    Thanks for sharing
     
  9. Nita

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    Deep!

    This was tyte..Way to take me there...into your wolrd by way of words
    spoken
    so smoothly....
    Nice one
    peace
     
  10. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ah wow...thank you brother python:heart:
     
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