Black Poetry : I was there...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LibertyLady, Apr 1, 2004.

  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a lttle parfume...
    Chin up ...
    Head high.....
    Dry youre eyes girl ...
    youre gonna say ""good"bey....
    Today he will fly....
    and it may take a while ...before ...
    you will cross eachothers eyes...
    Dont listen to the words he Said....

    Just remember ....All these times beside him....

    You were there...

    When this woman took advantage of him..

    You were there.....

    At his 60 st Jubelium at his work ..

    You were there....

    At his 60 st Birthday.....


    You were there.....


    When his mother Died ....


    as a liitle girl you were holding his hand...


    Behind Jail doors .....


    throug youre sickness you took care....


    Come on girl ..

    head Up ..chin Up....
    god knows you cared...
    Dont listen to the words he said...
    Lord knows you didnt leave the band...
    and everyone knows how you faught for it untill the end

    Lord knows sinds a child you have worked for youre talents.
    but that some things You dont have it in youre hands...
    and that were youre desthiny end is a part of his plan..

    Yes..
    good girl..
    for the sake of love...
    i,m gonna be there again..
    and give him a big huge....
    this is me and this is what god wants...


    15 minuts past 11....

    were are you dad....
    looking around...
    When we hang up the phone i wasnt mad..
    just sad..
    but i told him i,m gonna be there....


    11:30.....


    .........................

    .............................

    ...............................


    12 :40 ......


    the plain lifts up.....




    were was he ....?


    does he think i,m mad.....i was,nt planning to

    leave him on the aiport....

    never that....








    he made a fault in time....









    .....




    I was there..........
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    different...i like it...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    DEEPLY FELT IN MOTION
     
  4. rasheed

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    LL,
    i find it very interesting how you use words and space to convey your message and feeling. Nicely done...

    Peace and Blessings
     
  5. mistaliberator

    mistaliberator Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice piece

    you always inspire me
     
  6. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks all :heart:


    realy apriciate it..





    Love L
     
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    wonderful flow sis
    Peace
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